User:WikidPuns/Tanjiro Kamado/Samhi60 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(WikidPuns)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WikidPuns/Tanjiro_Kamado?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tanjiro Kamado

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead was updated with some information about the manga. However, there should be a common after Feb. 15, 2016. It does include an introductory sentence, and it is up to date. I cannot read the first source, but it looks okay. I am unsure about the second source, however, because it is run by a fandom page. I do see, however, that the site has its references. It seems reliable. The one thing that might need to be added it a mention of home/love that is well written out. Tanjiro does love his sister and is trying his best to cure her, but that might need to be mentioned instead of just the quote.