User:Wikieditor1685/Kernos/RaccoonEnjoyer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikieditor1685


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Wikieditor1685/Kernos - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kernos - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The planned expansion of the article looks ambitious but great. Given the timeframe left maybe consider not so many sections so each section has a fair amount of text. Along this line when formatting all the images that are planned consider alternating which side of the page has all the images, it can break up the text into more visually appealing chunks that can make an article more digestible. I noticed there were two citation sections and a bibliography, if there is a problem figuring out how to do the citations maybe ask Christine for help. I think this is a great idea and has tons of potential, however, I am worried about the timescale of the rest of the quarter with the amount of changes proposed.