User:Wikieditor3201/Earth Goddess/Azmason91 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikieditor3201


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikieditor3201/Earth_Goddess?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Earth goddess

Evaluate the drafted changes
For the "Lead", there is not much to review. One sentence as of right now, So for the review as of right now I would say there has not been an update supported by sources cited. This may change as it might be edited at a later time.There is however a brief description about the "Earth Goddess". As of right now there is also nothing that is in this article that is not in the original.

For "Content" not much to go off of. Nothing to read, For "sources and references" there is sources as references and from, however when I click on it the link wont work for me, and don't show up on the sandbox page, but when I go to the bibliography page I can see them, but cannot click on them, but when entered I can see the sites and looks like each site works.

"Tone and Balance" not much there right now so cannot comment on any changes. No images or media.

Overall I was excited to read this, and from the sources that were cited I am excited to see how this turns out. The sources seem descriptive and engaging, so I hope that the descriptiveness and how engaging those articles are are transferred over to this article. I look forward to reading this when it is completed.