User:Wikiedits0503/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I will be editing the C-Class Article; Monsta X: The Dreaming.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because K- POP happens to be one topic I have slight knowledge of. This group specifically.

Evaluate the article
The article starts off very short. Yes, an intro to any kind of writing should be short and sweet but I think there could be a bit more information given in the paragraph. In my opinion the lead paragraph could be stronger, but the paragraph isn't bad as a whole. The whole article is short and very brief in detail. Although the article is not suppose to be about the group itself but the mention of the group and the movies significance to the group I feel would be beneficial. I think that if people come to the article because they are curious about the movie it would and could help lead them to the group of they were to be given more information about the group. I definitely think that the article could be better, but I also do not think that it is hard to read or understand. Most of the references are pretty simple and correct, but I think they could be used stronger.