User:Wikiedits32/Scandal (TV series)/Cmariee Peer Review

NOTE FROM COURSE INSTRUCTOR: I agree with the overall review here. It is a well sourced and generally well written addition to the article. Making sure there are at least a few links to main figures like Shonda Rhimes and Kerry Washington would be good. I also agree that keeping that original lede on social media would be a good intro to the section. There are a few places where it might be good to proofread and go over the text one more time, but overall it is a great addition that highlights an crucial dimension of this program in the history of TV and second screen usage.

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Wikiedits32


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 * Scandal (TV series) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, your social media section of the article is really informative and easy to understand. The content and resources you provided are relevant to the section of the article. You did great at keeping this section neutral, and not overrepresenting one topic. Two things that I think you should try adding to your writing is, using the small paragraph from the original article, it would be great as a leader, it gets straight to the topic and quickly goes over what your whole section is about. I also think you should try adding more links to other Wikipedia pages, I noticed the main article links Kerry Washingtons name every time it is mentioned and other actors/topics. Overall, your article is very strong and goes more in depth compared to what they had before, making it more complete especially since this is how the show became extremely popular.