User:Wikientry01/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Canada Goose (clothing)


 * Article Evaluation
 * On the top of the article, it says that this is written like an advertisement and that people may have gotten disclosed payments to write about Canada Goose.


 * Sources
 * Canada Goose (clothing)

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Converse (lifestyle wear)


 * Article Evaluation
 * I think they need to include more of what the article is about on the top of the article, it's mostly about converse's history, but at the end it shows other things that could use more clarification in the beginning.


 * Sources
 * Converse (lifestyle wear)

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Perfume


 * Article Evaluation
 * Something they could've improved on was describing the different pictures they put in. For example, on the top they explained each and every picture but when we go down to the different families of scents, there's only a few. I would suggest to put a picture for every example (multiple occasions for the visuals).


 * Sources
 * Perfume

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Rice Water


 * Article Evaluation
 * Something that could've been improved with this is the amount of information that isn't added. To improve on this article, I could research more about rice water and its benefits, how it grows hair, how it affects the skin, etc.


 * Sources
 * Rice water

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Forensic science


 * Article Evaluation
 * It says on the top that this article is written from a person's opinion. I could improve on this article and edit it to make it seem like "encyclopedic style" so it isn't like a argumentative-style essay.


 * Sources
 * Forensic science