User:Wikientry01/Rice water/Danariana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Wikientry01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikientry01/Rice_water?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think everything in this wikipedia entry is well typed. In chronological order as well as keeps high interest of it's readers.