User:Wikientry01/Rice water/JamHGoYangI22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikientry01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wikientry01/Rice water
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rice water

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article includes beneficial information on rice water. From it improving your digestive health and removing acne. The paragraph also contains lots of varies sources from health medias to Twitter. Overall, the only thing I would consider removing would be the "Everyday" at the beginning of the paragraph. It creates an assumed tone, implying that anyone people who uses rice water, uses it every single day.