User:Wikimedstudent/Blue baby syndrome/Sunae712 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikimedstudent


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Wikimedstudent/Blue_baby_syndrome&oldid=1065478661
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Blue baby syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
The work done is actually very good, although it focuses on one aspect of what can cause blue baby syndrome (methemeglobinemia) rather than a less detailed overview of more important causes such as hypoxia or detailing specific congenital cardiac defects. However, I think that the author will do this following this peer review process. This is a very interesting topic and I look forward to reading more about blue baby syndrome, and maybe the author can incorporate information on TEt spells, and how squatting increases systemic vascular resistance which causes blood to flow from the left to right thereby alleviating lack of pulmonic flow due to stenosis. Great work so far and keep it going!