User:Wikistu03/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the article about Mary Jackson, a former aerospace engineer.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because I am very interested in the history of minority developers that seem to have gone underappreciated due to their circumstances. This matters immensely because it is important to provide clear and concise details about obscure figures in history to avoid making them seem unimportant, when in reality, people such as Mary Jackson have played crucial roles in development. My first impression of the article was that it would not include much detail, but this was not the case.

Evaluate the article
The article is very clear and straight-to-the-point, with its parts being broken up with very clear subheadings. Information that appeared in the lead section would be mentioned further within the article, making it consistent. By following the talk page discussion, all content within the article has remained relatively up-to-date. There are no grammatical errors, and the tone of the article is completely neutral and factual. In terms of visual appeal, all images are relevant to the topic and have descriptive captioning.