User:Wikistudent100/Spiral of silence/Alabamagold Peer Review

General info
Wikistudent100
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wikistudent100/Spiral of silence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spiral of silence

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that your paragraphs effectively establish the historical context by mentioning the theory's creator, Elisabeth Noelle-Neumann, and her work. However, it could be more informative by adding a bit more detail about the theory's historical and social backdrop in the 1970s, which could help readers understand why this theory was significant at that time. Also the inclusion of a list of researchers who have contributed to the study of the Spiral of Silence is valuable, as it indicates the theory's extensive and ongoing research interest. However, providing a brief summary of their key contributions or findings could add depth to the discussion. The paragraph is generally well-written and uses language that is easy to understand. However, there are some long sentences that could be broken into shorter ones for improved readability. Overally I think you did very well with your paragraphs.