User:Wikistudent100/Spiral of silence/Jld20eo Peer Review

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User:Wikistudent100/Spiral of silence
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wikistudent100/Spiral of silence
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spiral of silence

Evaluate the drafted changes
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After reading the sandbox and comparing it to the original article itself, it is clear that this group is working on diving deeper into the background of the Spiral of silence. They provided many specific details, going into depth on how this was created and providing quotations. Also, they cited all their sources correctly. Overall, the lead has been updated with these new additions added to the original. The added writing has no significant grammatical errors. I appreciated how, in the end, they kept a large amount of research, with providing dates, that had been conducted to establish credibility.

Overall,  I did not notice any drastic changes in the sandbox compared to the original. I think they should add more to the articles with new findings and maybe some research conducted this year.