User:Wildgooseontheloose/Water in California/Kirasbeans Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) wildgooseontheloose


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wildgooseontheloose/Water_in_California?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water in California

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I agree with the two sources you have chosen to support the introductory paragraph of Surface Water. Government sources like those are great for the kind of information contained there.

The other edit I noticed that you made so far is the addition of the clause on hydroelectricity. I may be quite off, but it feels to me like that addition doesn't fit in this article the way it is right now; there is nothing I could find in it about hydropower and so that clause didn't feel like it belonged. However, discussing hydropower in an article about water in California does feel appropriate. Have you considered adding a paragraph or section on it- say, in the Uses of Water section?