User:Wildgooseontheloose/Water in California/Sandro1324 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wildgooseontheloose


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wildgooseontheloose/Water in California


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water in California

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this classmate also put their drafted edit into their personal sandbox. If I were to give a word of advice based on reading the article is definitely make up your mind on what you want to specifically talk about. There is a lot of categories and subcategories and based on skimming it seems like previous editors have completely avoided intersecting these categories which seems difficult to do so because there is so much information on California and they break it all up based on Uses, Distribution, Management, Disasters, and Climate Change; I would see myself trying to bring those ideas together but the Lead section of your edit will help make clear exactly what you're adding without changing the structure. I hope this makes sense and helps! Its a big topic.