User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef/Cherrycoke5 Peer Review

General info
User: Wildinnn
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mesophotic coral reef

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section summarizes the content of the article well but lacks description of the other topics discussed in the article. The subheadings are well placed and the content is arranged according to the headings. The content is neutral and concise and I like the structure, it can be polished more by the final edit.

User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef

The above section is from the subheading 'Ecosystem services', I am assuming User:Wildinnn has not edited that in the original article. There appears to be a grammatical error in that sentence, and the phrasing seems awkward and could be revised. The content underneath that heading does not have any footnotes/sources in the users draft.

Moreover all the content for each subheading do not have any sources mentioned in the draft. Please add references as you continue to edit the content.

As for the sources, the lead section has links to the references used and the sources seem to be written by diverse group of authors.

Suggestions for improvement:

In the lead section, the second sentence has mentioned MCEs whereas the following third sentence says "Mesophotic Coral Ecosystem (MCEs)" this could be rearranged so that the second sentence saying the full form with the abbreviation in brackets. The following sentences can then be phrased using the abbreviation MCEs.

User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef

The above sentence is redundant and can be revised as follows: " They are distributed globally but remain mostly understudied."

User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef

Anthropogenic impact is specifically caused by humans, so please emit using 'human anthropogenic' in the sentence. Additionally, there was a grammar error; please change 'though' to 'thought' for proper past tense.

User:Wildinnn/Mesophotic coral reef

There is a small grammatical error in your sentence. I would change " which are significantly from" and rephrase that as there is no clarity.