User:Will.Lawing/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The Halluci Nation

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
We chose Halluci Nation because we have studied this musical group throughout our entire class. They are important because they find their niche in Indigenous Futurisms through their music and the imagery within their video. My preliminary impression is that the article is in depth and discusses their entire history as a group with their discography and impacts included.

Evaluate the article
Content: The Halluci Nation is well described within this article. While there are some foreign concepts and terms used in this article, each of the words are linked and help the reader understand. By going in depth with their information, the reader is able to understand the group, their origins, and their discography through the years that has helped them in their activism efforts.

Tone: The article is very neutral in nature. The authors are simply providing information about the group and what they stand for rather than guiding the reader towards stating if they're in favor or against their activism. Overall, the tone for this article is exactly what a reader should expect.

Sources: The article has a variety of sources that help the reader understand foreign terms and concepts. The reader can understand various genres of music, albums from The Halluci Nation, or awards they have won through the sources available. There are more opportunities for sources regarding terminology used, but this is already a sources-heavy article.

Talk Page: The talk page of this article has not been touched since 2018. This seems to be a very outdated section of this article and could use some more edits from future wikipedia editors. It has been rated a low importance article and could use more detail or impact statements towards indigenous futurisms to provide more impact.