User:Will282848/Alazan Bay/Cole Trinter Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tyler Strachan and Will Bolen's article regarding Alazan Bay.


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 * User:Will282848/Alazan Bay

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I found the article to have good information although it is all presented in one paragraph and loosely covers a variety of topics. I would like to see more in depth information and maybe another paragraph or two.

I also found there to not be any location as well. It says it's near Baffin Bay and some coordinates, but what state or area?

Go further into depth about the wildlife in the area maybe? Offering a couple fish is good but that provides room to offer more information.

There should be a works cited section to give the original content and it's creators credit.

Overall, needs some more written down but there is good surface information that has a bunch of room to dive deeper into!