User:Will590/Fanaticism/JamonicaLewis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Will590


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Fanaticism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing your article I believe there are a lot of areas that could be added to topic. I think it would be a good idea too add how this is related to science as well as elaborate more on the history and background.