User:Will590/Fanaticism/Jaylaa20 Peer Review

Hi, Will590!

Fanaticism is such a broad topic, you can add different sections dedicated to its different areas. You can talk about fanaticism in religion, in society, in cultures. Different subcultures may be fanatic about something in particular such as Harry Potter or any other "cult favorites."

You can talk about the origins of fanaticism, and how it has evolved if it has at all. History Is riddled with different cases of fanaticism, so many you can talk some of those cases when giving information about the background of fanaticism. You can talk about fanaticism and its various applications, too, like its definition in different fields of study.

So far the current article just gives bits and pieces of information about fanaticism, and citations are needed for some of the information. You can elaborate on anything already written and add citations. You can also give it a better flow for readers by adding more sections, and organizing it further.

I hope some of this feedback helped!

~Jaylaa20

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Will590


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Will590/Fanaticism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fanaticism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, Will590!

Fanaticism is such a broad topic, you can add different sections dedicated to its different areas. You can talk about fanaticism in religion, in society, in cultures. Different subcultures may be fanatic about something in particular such as Harry Potter or any other "cult favorites."

You can talk about the origins of fanaticism, and how it has evolved if it has at all. History Is riddled with different cases of fanaticism, so many you can talk some of those cases when giving information about the background of fanaticism. You can talk about fanaticism and its various applications, too, like its definition in different fields of study.

So far the current article just gives bits and pieces of information about fanaticism, and citations are needed for some of the information. You can elaborate on anything already written and add citations. You can also give it a better flow for readers by adding more sections, and organizing it further.

I hope some of this feedback helped!

~Jaylaa20