User:WillG5150/Hockey jersey/Justinebrosio Peer Review

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WillG5150
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I think this is a great start. There is clear intentions to insert references which is great. I expected this to be a long definition of hockey jerseys so it was nice getting a little more than that. I think It would enjoy seeing a break the article down in to 1) Definition, what is hockey (this would be a good opportunity to link the hockey wikipage), what is a jersey, why does hockey use jerseys? 2) Traditions with jerseys (I.E alternate jerseys) 3) Important Events (I.E showing support to the LGBTQ Community)

Some other questions I have are, who designed hockey jerseys? Most jerseys are really tight or aren't as baggy. Why are they baggy?

Overall a great start. Looking forward to reading more!!!