User:Will longley/Political satire/Eliza27Beth Peer Review

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Political Satire
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Will:

I agree that adding a potentially more well known and relevant example of political satire, under "Well-known examples of political satire" will be a beneficial additional to the article. However, I do think you should make sure whatever example you end up including is not otherwise already in the article.

Maggie:

I'm not sure if you are able to in the Sandbox, but make sure you are hyperlinking to the necessary Wikipedia article when first mentioning something/someone, like when you name Benjamin Franklin, Thomas Nast, and Mark Twain. Additionally, I think it could be beneficial to give actual examples of political satire done by Twain and Nast, as opposed to just saying the issues they commented on.

Thank you, I will definitely add the hyperlinks and add examples of the political satire done by Nast and Twain! -Maggie