User:Will longley/Political satire/Forst.michael Peer Review

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Gigi: I think the portion you edited on Effects on Political Participation was good. When reading it the only thing that I would want moe information on is the sentence - "which many might find beneficial." When reading that I initially had the thought of what are the people finding it beneficial to? I would just add maybe one or two sentences explaining on what is being benefitted. You're right that is definitely worded weird. I think instead I would write, " It is documented that watching comedy television in relation to politics increased online interaction, which ultimately increases voters. The satirical politics discussed in these shows is oftentimes educational, creating a more politically informed America." Thank you for pointing that out, it was strange. -Gigi
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Will: For the portion you are editing about the Divine Comedy poem it might be helpful to add a link or a resource that can help break down the meaning of the poem as the time it was written it might be confusing to modern English, which can lead to confusion.


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