User:Willa Wei/Sex-ratio imbalance in China/Dhar4601 Peer Review

General info
Willa Wei
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Willa Wei/Sex-ratio imbalance in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex-ratio imbalance in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your changes have really improved the article! Your sources are reliable and provide good additional information for the article. I think your addition of the actual numbers of the sex ratio helps the reader to conceptualize how unbalanced the ratio is.

I also liked how you changed the paragraph in the "Son preference in Chinese historical and traditional culture" section. It provides good insight into why there is a preference for sons, but maybe it needs a source for readers to reference? You list the different reasons why there is a preference for sons in Confucian patriarchal culture, so maybe you could cite something that further explains that and supports that information.

Overall, I think you've made really good changes. The tone of the article is neutral and the sources are up to date and reliable. Keep up the great work!