User:Willa Wei/Sex-ratio imbalance in China/Xiajiao3510 Peer Review

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Willa Wei
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 * User:Willa Wei/Sex-ratio imbalance in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sex-ratio imbalance in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall, I think your changes are professional and meaningful! You added the 2000 data of China's gender ratio imbalance, which, together with the 2020 data, added a chronological view to track the changes of China's gender ratio across time. Regarding your second revision, "A study of United Nations ... during that period," you rewrote the original sentence in a more rigorous way backed by clear data reference.

My only advice is to add some citations to the "China’s traditional Confucian patriarchal culture ..." paragraph. Looking forward to your final article!