User:Willa Wei/Sex trafficking in China/Dandelion1984 Peer Review

General info
Willa
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Willa Wei/Sex trafficking in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex trafficking in China
 * Sex trafficking in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job, Willa! I think the edits you made are written in a neutral manner and with appropriate sources. You do not seem to be biased and the information you added are relevant and not distracting. Judging by the edits you made so far, I do not think there are any view points you over/under-represented. The sources you cited look good as well, since they are from notable publications/organizations. They are really timely, which is important for an article that involves an issue that is very much a problem in the present.

Your plan for the the edits you are going to do next seems reasonable as well. One question: What parts of those sections are you considering changing?

One statement that I noticed was without a citation: "Chinese citizens, primarily women and girls, have been sex trafficked to the various provinces of China, as well as other countries in Asia and different continents. Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, the Middle East, and North America. Illegal organizations often lure Chinese women abroad under the guise of legitimate work in other countries. Once these women arrive in that country, they are forced them into prostitution and commercial sexual exploitation. Chinese women are usually trafficked to Japan, Malaysia, Thailand, and Taiwan. Many Chinese victims have been detected in overseas Chinese expatriate communities." This statement would benefit from a citation so you can establish the credibility of this claim.