User:Willa Wei/Sex trafficking in China/Haiyili222 Peer Review

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Willa Wei
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 * Sex Trafficking in China
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article provides many details and informations of sex trafficking in China. I appreciate that you added the information of sex trafficking of foreign women and children.

For the part of victims, I saw you added the information of number of victims, and I suggest to add more resources to support the information, especially academic resources or governmental reports which are essential for this kind of information.

I also suggest to extend the section of why sex trafficking is a severe problem in China, and there are many academic researches or news report to address the reasons, there are many available articles arguing the reasons of sex trafficking in China. Or you can consider adding the section of the history of sex trafficking in China, which would explain more clearly.