User:Williabd/Phobia/Aebner01 Peer Review

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Williabd
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Evaluate the drafted changes
There is little information edited within the users sandbox but based off of what is in there I would suggest going back and finding alternative sources for reliability purposes. Try identifying sources in which are peer reviewed and still back up the claims made. The article itself is very big and full of information pertaining to the history of identifying phobias, treatments, classifications, as well as how individual variations impact them. One thing that came to mind when reading this article was how current circumstances around the world are impacting individuals with certain phobias. For example, how has the Covid 19 pandemic impacted those with certain types of phobias? Are there more instances of individuals with agoraphobia (fear of germs) now than ever before as a result? The reference pulled by Williabd pertains to virtual reality as a therapeutic tool for people with certain types of phobias. I would suggest pulling sources in which highlights the outcomes of these sessions and success rates while touching on the pros and cons of this treatment tool. The article has a number of reliable sources which backs up the statements made throughout, by going into each section and diving deeper into the content this will create a deeper understanding of phobias overall.