User:Williamjiang0816/Poverty in Vietnam/Saronogd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Williamjiang0816


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Williamjiang0816/Poverty_in_Vietnam?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Poverty in Vietnam

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think better pictures could be used. The pictures in the sandbox do not correspond with the associated text. The first picture shown seems to be a picture showing how the lower class transports around Vietnam, but the associated text is about economic growth. I don't see how those two relate unless the government is providing this transportation? It may be beneficial to be more clear. Also, I do not see what text the second picture titled "Vietnam's crumbling coastline and buildings" is associated with. That should also be more clear. You should also include your references.