User:Williamspeech11/Mount Simon Sandstone/K.1luck Peer Review

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Williamspeech11
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 * Mount Simon Sandstone - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is clearly underdeveloped. One major area of improvement was definitely the lead. I think you did a good job introducing the topic with your updated lead. I especially liked that you added where it can be found. Coming from someone who knows nothing about geology, it may be nice to link out some of the information such as shale beds, sand shoal, and brachiopods. If you wanted to add more to the article, you could include some pictures. Also, make sure to insert references after the period. Otherwise, the draft looks really well done so far.