User:Willow333/Exploitation of women in mass media/Chickadee101 Peer Review

General info
Willow333
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Willow333/Exploitation of women in mass media
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Exploitation of women in mass media

Evaluate the drafted changes
The "Exploitation of Women in Mass Media" has a clear structure and a good use of headings. The article is well organized and just is in need of a Lead section. It looks like all of the points made in the article are backed up by sources. Something to keep in mind would be to make sure that the content is neutral sounding.