User:WillowTakahashi/Plagiotremus ewaensis/Waileia6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WillowTakahashi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Plagiotremus ewaensis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Plagiotremus ewaensis

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Hello Willow, I know you probably haven't begun editing much yet, but I like the base starting information. You could maybe add more Hawaiian related information in the lead section like the Hawaiian name of your species, if there is one. I would recommend seeing if there is an update for the endangerment of the species since the source 1 (https://www.iucnredlist.org/species/48342097/48358195) might be outdated.

For the rest of the article I recommend adding the anatomy, describing how it looks and adding a picture to give more of an idea to the reader. You could also include habitat, cultural significance, and conservation status. Overall good start and I know you'll do great.

Peer Review Response:
Hey Waileia, thank you for the feedback. I will definitely try to add more Hawaiian related information into my article if I can. I believe in one of my sources, the Kaneohe Bay article, there should be some more Hawaiian habitat information if I dig a little deeper. I've looked through a couple other websites to see if Plagiotremus Ewaensis’s status has been updated, but it looks like the last official review was done in 2009 and a new one hasn't been conducted, so technically that information is as up to date as it can be.

I'll be on the hunt for a license free image to add to the article, no luck yet!

There seems to be some anatomy already described in the published article so I don't want to over state that information, but I'll try to add details on maybe the weight of Plagiotremus Ewaensis if I’m able. Information on conservation seems to be pretty limited save for the fact that they can be found in Kaloko-Honokohau National Historical Park. Seeing as they are currently listed as non-threatened, I don't think I'll find much information on conservation unfortunately. However, for cultural significance, I should be able to find more information on that. Thanks for the suggestions! Best of luck with you article as well!