User:Winde068/Ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef/Pmbdanni Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Winde068


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Winde068/Ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ocean acidification in the Great Barrier Reef

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you have broken up the sections you are looking to edit, so it is easier to add or review them later.

What are you hoping to add to the article? It looks like the opening paragraphs in the original article could use more sources to back up what they are claiming. Do you have a working bibliography yet?

Overall, it is a good start.