User:WinnieAbraham/Incarceration and health/Mhanna1 Peer Review

General info
Winnie
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Incarceration and health

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Proposed Table of Contents is great --> it expands perfectly and I don't believe anything is missing.

- Would only recommend to change Menopause heading to Women's Health as a broader issue, and then add menopause as a subheading instead.

- Mental health might constitute its own heading, depending on how much information is available for this topic. Regardless, substance abuse/ mental health could definitely be expanded on for adults as well as youth.

- Otherwise no suggestions! Great job so far. Looking forward to reading it.

- Basic menstrual care is a concern in prison as well.

- Make sure to check for grammar and spelling before publishing.