User:Winter-PSU/Inequality in post-apartheid South Africa/Vedisobe Peer Review

General info
Winter-PSU.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Winter-PSU/Inequality in post-apartheid South Africa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Inequality in post-apartheid South Africa

Evaluate the drafted changes
Winter has an excellent outline with a detailed plan. I appreciate that Winter is prioritizing quality over quantity, and especially appreciate the reminder that we don't have to overhaul the entire article because I did myself forget that.

Winter seems to have a good start on their article draft and should be able to provide some much needed clarity to the article.