User:WiseWillowPtarmigan/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title Onchocerciasis:
 * Article Evaluation:This article has lots of grammatical errors, citations needed, and lots of chunks of information that are too wordy and confusing
 * Sources:CDC - Onchocerciasis

Option 2

 * Article title Adenomyoepithelioma of the breast:
 * Article Evaluation:This article is only one paragraph long. This is a rare form of breast tumor that needs more information on the page so people have access to it.
 * Sources:Adenomyoepithelioma of the breast: a brief diagnostic review - PubMed (nih.gov)

Option 3

 * Article title Epidemiology of HIV/AIDS:
 * Article Evaluation:This article needs to be updated, most of the information is from prior to 2010.
 * Sources:CDC's Division of HIV Prevention released three new HIV surveillance reports | NCHHSTP | CDC

Option 4

 * Article title Contact Dermatitis:
 * Article Evaluation:This article needs more information in the epidemiology section, especially occupational health epidemiology. It is also very confusing to read.
 * Sources:Contact dermatitis - Symptoms and causes - Mayo Clinic

Option 5

 * Article title Concussions in American football:
 * Article Evaluation:This article is very wordy. It has lots of complicated jargon that would be difficult for the average reader to understand. IT has hardly any pictures and the sources need updating.
 * Sources:NFL says regular-season concussions increased 18% in 2022 - ESPN