User:Wittlj/Lake Okeechobee/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Lydia,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 986 wow...nice. You have 17 refs wow again (all scientific articles).

As for you intro/general info. It is in great shape and extremely informative. I would recommend maybe linking a few more words to their wiki pages.

Now you need to switch gear to current research I noticed that you had discussed a few studies in your sections. You need 4 paragraphs that focus only on current research or current limnologist on lake Okeechobee. So even though you are close to 1000 word limit you are still lacking the 4 current research paragraphs required. Should be easy to dive more into discussion on some of the studies you have already cited.

-Katie

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