User:WizardOfFox/Internet troll/Pinkballoon25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) WizardOfFox


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WizardOfFox/Internet_troll?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internet troll

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sections appeared to be direct or indirect quotes from the article. Recommended rewording the phrasing.