User:WiznerdTheEagle/Data Imaginaries/Kaitlinabeele Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WiznerdTheEagle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WiznerdTheEagle/Data Imaginaries
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great lead paragraph. It is descriptive without getting bogged down in too much technical detail. One slight issue I found was with this sentence: "The current most established data imaginary is that of data analytics, which treats data as a from which neutral resource to extract value." The bolded section doesn't make sense. I think it's supposed to say form instead of from, but even still the sentence structure is a little awkward. I would revise the phrasing.


 * Jeez, I can't believe I missed that. It's supposed to be "which treats data as a neutral resource from which to extract value," I just seriously goofed the phrase placement. Reading it now, I'm going to replace it instead with "which treats data as a neutral resources from which people can extract value."

The structure and flow of your article is exceptional. Your thoughts are well organized, and backed up by a solid list of references. One slight hiccups here where you should include a citation: "According to Denick, social imaginaries enable social practices by providing ways to understand the world."


 * Again, can't believe I missed that. Fixing that!

You far and away meet the Notability requirements for Wikipedia to support the veracity of the article. Apart from the mentioned sentence above, you have included a thorough use of citations along with relevant quotes. The only other step that you may consider is finding some supporting imagery to accompany your article. With just a few minor tweaks, I think your article is well-suited to move into the published space. Well done!


 * Thank you very much! I've given images some passing thought, but nothing suitable really jumped out at me. I'll spend some focused time with the idea and see if anything seems appropriate, but unfortunately the concept is abstract enough that it doesn't really lend itself to simple visualization.
 * Update: found an image :)