User:Wkimmerling/Prison sexuality/Llpfqd Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wkimmerling


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wkimmerling/Prison_sexuality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison sexuality

Evaluate the drafted changes
Although the article is well written there could be some additions to improve it:

-There could be a perspective from LGBTQIA community to provide a more diverse outlook on relations in prisons.

-There could also be a more worldly perspective considering that the prison rape portion of the article is written about the UK and US.

-For reference, there could be images where possible.

Overall, the content is straightforward and informative.