User:Wm4901/Cervical artery dissection/Scody867 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wm4901


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wm4901/Cervical_artery_dissection?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cervical artery dissection

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is better, it could maybe include some some hint as to the most common causes, pathophys, and/or treatments.

Article is very well sourced throughout.

Second sentence about traumatic causes could use a citation.

Information about emboli could perhaps be in a new section about consequences/outcomes/complications.

Incomplete sections.

No images or media yet.

Some opportunities for copy-editing in several locations.

Overall highly relevant, well organized, up-to-date information with a neutral tone. Already a large improvement over the existing article.