User:Wnfrase/Grand Canyon/Bnthomas17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wnfrase


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wnfrase/Grand_Canyon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the additions that you have made to the article a lot! Almost all of the sentences were short and concise, which I think Wikipedia wants, and they were all very informative to the subject. For the last sentences, maybe you can add what those goals are that the NPS has created in order to combat climate change within the Park. In addition, your sources seem very reliable and trustworthy so you should be fine on that front. Other than that, you can definitely add more information if you felt like it but if not I think this is completely acceptable at providing sufficient information to readers on the effects of climate change on the Park.