User:Wolfpack3810/Nonverbal communication/LBrew1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) WolfPack3810


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wolfpack3810/Nonverbal_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nonverbal communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

First I will start with the things about this article that I liked, I though that he used his sources very well. He did not use direct quotes and also put a source for a piece of information that needed a source to be relevant to the reader. Throughout the edit I found it to be well written and having some valuable information that is pertaining to his topic. On the other side of things I found it pretty confusing which part of the article he was editing because he didn't specify if it was the Lead or Article body but that is an easy fix, I thought that there were somethings that could be fixed with some of the terms being used, there was also a spelling error which is a simple fix by just going back and checking the work over again. I think it would be valuable to add a portion about how non verbal communication is the majority of the way that we evaluate the words that people say and how we tell how each person is thinking and feeling.