User:Wolmos/sandbox

For the Wikipedia project, I will be editing the Mild Cognitive Impairment (MCI) page. This page had a C rating and I believe that it can be improved in several areas. For one, I have started adding information to the “infobox medical condition” as it was lacking information in how it is diagnosed and what types of MCI exist. For this information, I cite Petersen (2004) specifically for how it is diagnosed and plan to add and edit information underneath the “Diagnosis” heading as well. Furthermore, the work by Petersen and Bennett (2005) will be used to add to the page’s introduction paragraph as this article provides clearly summarized information that could clarify statements made in this first paragraph. Nonetheless, I have considered adding further information to the “Prevalence” heading since I believe it would be beneficial to insert updated information here.

Peterson, R. C. (2004). Mild cognitive impairment as a diagnostic entity. Journal of Internal Medicine, 256: 183–194

Petersen, R. C., & Bennett, D. (2005). Mild cognitive impairment: Is it Alzheimer’s disease or not? Journal of Alzheimer’s Disease 7 (2005), 241–24

Price Comments
This is looking good. Keep making progress! Paul C Price (talk) 17:35, 28 October 2019 (UTC)