User:Wolvesandtwins/Education in Saint Paul, Minnesota/Rchristo21 Peer Review

It looks like in your sandbox draft page, you included a brief reflection on why you chose this article to edit. I think (and I might be wrong on this since I've posted things in the wrong place a couple times) that your actual article edits should get posted in the sandbox page.

Having said that, I was looking through the original article and I noticed that the lead mentioned many important "educational firsts" that happened in Saint Paul, but the article body doesn't go into any greater detail on these things. I wonder if that would be something you'd consider adding to the article body. It might be interesting (and important) to the article to summarize the important role Saint Paul has played in education by focusing on these "firsts."

I also noticed in the original article in the "Public Schools" section that the first paragraph is unsourced. It makes specific, factual claims about the size of the district and its diversity but it doesn't cite a source to verify those facts. I think it would be important to find a source that either verifies these claims or one that can provide updated facts.