User:Wood-m98/Anthropology of art/Mackenzie0203stewart Peer Review

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I Think this is a well written piece! I think that your tones are neutral and that you have added a great amount of new material. My constructive comments are as follows:


 * 1) the spelling of Musee, does it not have an accent over the first e (Musée)
 * 2) My next critique would be that maybe to make the organization of the references better would be to have all references in one place rather than in different places.
 * 3) Don'f forget to put your references in your Bibliography sandbox!

Over all I think that this article is really well written and you've clearly done alot of research to be able to provide this much information! I really enjoyed your article!