User:Woodwix/Katja Blichfeld/Cosmickslop Peer Review

General info
Woodwix
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://w.wiki/7n3o
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think many of these sentences could be combined into paragraphs to give the article a cleaner look. There are lots of adequate sources and citations to them throughout the entire article which is great. There are not many academic sources, but there are often none or too few on directors, so it's good to supplement this lack through additional sources. There is lots of information in the Personal Life section which is good to see, though it may not all be necessary. Overall, this article draft looks great.