User:Woomm002/Futurism/Polaris850 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Woomm002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Woomm002/Futurism/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Futurism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is short and has good information, but seems to be missing information to inform the reader about the prevalent artists and influencers of this form of futurism.

I think the content is neutral and would be a good addition to the original article as it represents an underrepresented genre of futurism.

I like how it is organized to split up the overarching theme from key players in the genre.

It would be nice to have some pictures of some of the art or the people.

The content could be improved by adding a bit more to the actual definition of indigenous futurism.