User:WordlyWaleed/Mousterian/Fable1119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WordlyWaleed


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WordlyWaleed/Mousterian


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mousterian

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is simple and to the point with just enough detail that it does not feel overwhelming. The balance within the body of the paragraphs is really well done and it is clear the wiki writter structured the article well with the overall organization making it a flowing and convienent read. The sources appear to be used appropriately and at the right moments, and no biased tone of voice can be heard while reading. The article sticks to the facts and does well in giving a great overview of the topic. No images in the draft, but the actual article has some really nice images, so that may be why. Finals thoughts are that it is very solid, nothing too flashy and honestly a very good read for a quick but knowledge read on the subject, the writter nailed the wiki spirit.

ps. so sorry for the extremely late review. Have confidence in your work, you have done well. Congrats on making it to the end of the class going strong!