User:Worm Insurrection/Bash Back!/Folkloree Peer Review

General info
Worm Insurrection
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Bash Back!
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall it is a great start to the article. The introductory sentence could be worded in a more general way so that it is easier for all levels of readers to understand. Especially for those that may be new to the topic. There are a few quotes used that should be changed to paraphrasing with correct citations added. Since it was said in the "Actions" section that the international convergence was set to occur this past September, updated information could be added about the event. Information could also be added about people who played an important role in Bash Back! and where they are today. Overall, more detail could be added to both sections just to try to include more explanation for the information already provided.