User:Wormlowly/Native American use of fire in ecosystems/PaulRabil99 Peer Review

General info
Wormlowley
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wormlowly/Native_American_use_of_fire_in_ecosystems
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Native_American_use_of_fire_in_ecosystems

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the contributions you have made. I think that they provide additional information to sections that could be expanded on by using verified, current sources. Your specific details are clearly written and follow with the rest of the sections. I am wondering if some of the specific species that you mentioned should be capitalized (I really dont know): western lily, California tortoiseshell butterfly, ceanothus silk moth. You could include further detail on why some of the plants you mentioned are culturally significant. I would also explore the negative effects of burning (if there are any), as it could possibly provide more neutral description of the practice of burning. Overall, I think the contributions you made are relevant and well rounded, great job!